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Anew
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:03:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Where once the healthy bountiful earth
Spread far and wide,gave birth so pure
There lies a violated,weeping land
Still she holds grace enough to allure
Her beauty marred but still she shines
Though trees are less,through man and fire
I stand atop this mountain's peak
Release my breath in a sigh and admire
Soft amber strokes paint the afternoon sky
The graceful drift of a hawk as she descends
A waterfall cascades like crystalline blues
Miracles anew as the day finds its end
The dance of the wild,a warm soulful breeze
Caresses,kisses my hair and is caught
It plays for a while.then grants me a smile
While gently giving flight to my thoughts
How freely I'm blessed,welcomed and held
This gift that she offers my being
Acceptance is nurturing,helping me grow
Through new eyes,I become the "all seeing"
Tranquil in mind,I now am the hawk
Feathered warmth on a backdrop of peace
Silence surrounds,a calming spreads through
As one with this mural,my soul is at ease
Freedom is mine as I take to the sky
Eyes cast to the wonders below
With breeze under wing,a journey begins
Guide me Great Spirit,I'll follow
Sounds of the spirits,cleansing,refreshing
Pools of the waterfalls essence
Circles are formed,filled with the magic
Of all that is pure,your presence
Great Spirit,so knowing,tender of touch
I give thanks to you for this flight
In the body of wonder,here on your breath
You bless me with such inner sight
As always I've seen,and still see today
The beyond of what others may see
Waters not just a body of liquid
There are more than bark and leaves to a tree
Within all that which you created
Lives a spirit,uniquly its own
All living things,especially the critters
Hold the knowledge,rarely a mans known
On the wind,Great Spirit,I hear you
Your wisdom pours forth from the skies
In all living things,you placed a spirit with wings
Yet man is self bound and can't fly
Freedoms a choice and you made it so
Yet man cripples himself with greed
I give thanks for these wings,my spirit still sings
Because Great Spirit...you're all I need
Great Spirit...
I am your daughter
Carer of all your creations
I say your name with strength and pride
You touch my days with tenderness and healing
Great Spirit...
I am on my journey to lasting freedom
Through your eyes,I see all
~wa do~
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2004-03-23 14:03:21]
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Re: Anew
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:10:35 PM AEST
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@>~~>~~
michelle
how did you do the picture *beautiful* |
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Re: Anew
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:15:14 PM AEST
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wonderful imagery...a tapestry of words
Shari |
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Re: Anew
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:19:09 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful Write
Loved It....
WoW How Do You Do That Picture
Thing On Here?I've Seen Alot Of
People Doing That.... It Looks Good
With The Poems....
Please Let Me Know....
Thank You So Much...
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Anew
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:09:44 PM AEST
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soft and flowing like a melody this is beyond words
michelle |
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Re: Anew
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:54:04 PM AEST
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What can one say about something written so beautifully, except to simply say....beautiful.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Anew
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:45:46 PM AEST
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Magnificence!
Rita |
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Re: Anew
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:42:39 PM AEST
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Love the way the words seem to tumble effortlessly onto the page on this one
Great work
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Re: Anew
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:04:02 PM AEST
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Great to see your beautiful words once more... I have missed you....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Anew
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by StoneAngel on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:36:14 PM AEST
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How do u do that picture thing???
I loved it. Nice poem very indepth.
Its like reading a story. |
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