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Keeping In Step
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:56:07 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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keeping in step with you
erased all the past
blended into background
meaningless rubble
heaped in the corners
nothing to trip over
or stumble upon
keeping in step with you
ready and able
willing to please
bend over backwards
without question
expectations are nill
hope sits in my hip pocket
keeping in step with you
racing out ahead
taunt me if you will
there is little dignity
and more desire
in the weakness of flesh
corrupt and bankrupt
keeping in step with you
lead me off and away
without any reason
I follow blind and needy
for something I don't know
but you have it
and I want it
keeping in step with you
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-03-23 13:56:07]
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Re: Keeping In Step
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:13:17 PM AEST
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dearest gaille, this is excellent, i love your style of writing so much, always so vibrant and alive, your poetry breathes:) huggies, woofies n' love nessa
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Re: Keeping In Step
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:17:51 PM AEST
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I agree with Nessa...your poetry has life in each word. I dont read it..I feel it.
Beautifully done as always
Roses
Larry
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Re: Keeping In Step
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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So Beautiful.....Loved It.....
Awesome Write....
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVeL,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Keeping In Step
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:11:34 PM AEST
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wonderful write most enjoyable
michelle |
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Re: Keeping In Step
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:15:28 AM AEST
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| Don't I know it ... every word shouts to me ... as always you speak the words that fill my heart ... Jan |
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