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Smokey Killer
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The cough in the morning, It's ok
I won't die...
Said the man with the cig in his hand
(His favourite brand)
The pain in my head? It's ok
Nothing to keep me in bed
I won't die...
Said the man with the cig in his hand
The cramps in my chest? It's ok
I've took a blood test
I should be fine...
Said the man with the cig in his hand
The swelling in my throat? It's ok
I'm sure there's an antidote
I should be fine...
Said the man with the cig in his hand
The man on his deathbed? Poor chap
He'll soon be dead
Throat cancer got him...
Said the woman with the cig in her hand
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adsalamon
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2004-03-23 13:15:52]
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Re: Smokey Killer
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:45:43 PM AEST
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| As a strong smoker I agree with all you have written. Smoking kills in various ways. cheers from bernard. |
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Re: Smokey Killer
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:44:25 PM AEST
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I'm an antismoker too, thought this was very thought provoking, hope it works on some people who read this, well done 10/10
Ali xx |
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Re: Smokey Killer
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:11:25 PM AEST
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Well I'm A 20yr Old That Smokes.
This Really Got To Me Cause
I May Have Throat Cancer....I've Been Smoking Every Since I Was Like
9yrs Old Behind My MoM And DaD's Back
Until Now......If I Had It To Do All Over Again
I Would Have Never Started Smoking....
I've Got To See A Otorhinolaryngology
Tomorrow For Some Tests To See If I Do
Have Throat Cancer...This Will Make
Non~Smokers Think Before They Start
The Habbit..Glad You Posted It....
Very Great Write .....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,
Oh Incase Your Wondering Otorh.
Is A Ear~Nose~And~Throat~Specialist... |
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Re: Smokey Killer
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by NewsFromNowhere on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:57:32 PM AEST
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| Smoking's cool and you know it Mr.Adrian sir. :p |
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