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Carve Alone
Contributed by
danimus
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:53:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Minds function is a cutting tool
But what defines character?
If addiction captures the fool
Then how would it carve?
Another blade to go to waste
In the days of ghostly beige
And it gradually destroys its base
With a want, a need, a cage
Has that knife worn so thin?
That it's tough to cut
What you was about to begin
And you say it was a knot
How many times have you wounded yourself?
The evidence is clearly on your face
How is it to indulge what you dealt?
When the knife's health is becoming dull
A tool that was once a mind
Can not finish its last cuts
Now that the blade is grime
But it was the owner tending to addict
The substance to blind their working eyes
And it's a curve that they can't carve to hide
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danimus
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2004-03-23 10:53:17]
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Re: Carve Alone
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:07:00 PM AEST
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ugh, if i read one more write about this... lol, joking!! man, so many of these writes i'm reading lately! good writing, it's pressing me to think! ;0)
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Re: Carve Alone
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by Hoots on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:46:04 PM AEST
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Great write!! This is soooooo sad! Keep up the good work! Write some more!! ; )
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