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Love sail
Contributed by
uchendu
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:50:44 AM in AEST
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Eyes watery they are
nice all my thoughts wear
afloat they sail in my heart
joy of singing birds chirping
ploy of strong waves coming
afloat they sail in my heart
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
sail-sail-sail-sail-sail-sail
on an ocean of love I sail
gentle waves of peace I feel
shaping my heart to a love-steel
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
sun bright she shines
fun here wines and dines
within the bricks of my heart
there I see fairy boats assail
here where peace and joy hail
within the bricks of my heart
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
all within the bricks of my heart.
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uchendu
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2004-03-23 09:50:44]
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Re: Love sail
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:17:42 PM AEST
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almost sounds like you're going to break down and cry at any given moment, pretty writing... ;0)
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Re: Love sail
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by desire on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:48:52 AM AEST
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| im must say this is quite nice, it is like you are waiting for love to come to you..kinda sad in away to me for some reason..i guess i love that i can feel the emotion of the w ait...i give this a 5 i love it.........great job my friend tell me what inspired it.....desire |
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Re: Love sail
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:11:36 PM AEST
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Hey handsome,
Very good write aand I'm ssure she's happy that u feel it and can see it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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