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Deliever Me

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:34:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Deliever me from this hell
No new stories to tell
Nothing left to say
Only left to decay

Deliever me from these halls
Tired of these tumbling falls
No new tales to write
Just repeating day and night

Deliever me from this game
Everyone here seems tamed
With nothing left undone
Everyone has died and I am one

Deliever me from this dead
My only friends are the voices in my head
Everyone else is gone or inslaved
And from this hell I want to be saved

In these halls I am dead from what I gave
In this game none will be speared
As the dead walk polluting the air

I don't want this
I give up my final kiss
Just to fly away
So alone I can decay

Deliever me from this hell
No new stories to tell
And for all I gave
I have become a slave

So if I give up my dreams before I wake
Please don't let me come back

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-03-23 04:34:34]
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Re: Deliever Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:47:18 AM AEST
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so true and dark , i liked the lines
"Deliever me from these halls
Tired of these tumbling falls
No new tales to write
Just repeating day and night"

good job
Gina

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