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I Knew It
Contributed by
kayald
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 12:02:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I knew it, I knew it, I knew it,
You’re not as cocky as you seem.
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it,
It wasn’t just a dream.
You do have a sadder half
The one you work to hide
Now I know how you really feel
About yourself inside.
I want to tell you you’re wonderful,
But that’s no longer my place.
I want to explain how striking you are,
And how I love to look at your face.
She offers no consoling
It’s only I who truly cares
My faith in your beauty
Can outlast all your inner snares.
Listen to my thoughts
Since they can’t be said.
Hear what I am thinking
At this moment in my head.
You are beautiful
And I miss you more each day
I’m sorry you’ll never hear this
But these are things I cannot say.
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-03-23 00:02:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Knew It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:06:35 AM AEST (User
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That was a great poem, emotional and very sad. It's tough to know that sometimes you really want to tell someone what you're thinking but are never able to. |
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Re: I Knew It
(User Rating: 1 ) by badlander on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:55:48 AM AEST (User
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Excellent!! Wisdom beyond your years, keep it up.GOOD JOB!! |
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Re: I Knew It
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:24:31 AM AEST (User
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NICE WRITE! I LIKED IT ALOT,WAY TO GO!!
DAN!!! |
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