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Behind these Walls
Contributed by
Twitch06
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Trapped in these walls
Trying to escape.
But it takes forever
At this pace.
When will they fall,
And let me go?
If they fall,
When will I know?
How long will I
Have to wait?
Or do I have to
Sit here and meditate?
When I look at you,
All I feel is hate.
Now it's too late,
Cause you're gone
And I have no one
To blame it on.
I want to escape.
Is there a trap
Door anywhere?
I need freedom,
May I please have it?
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Twitch06
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2004-03-22 23:57:22]
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Re: Behind these Walls
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 12:40:51 AM AEST
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| It is never to late to escape..... |
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Re: Behind these Walls
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by twinkletoes on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:08:43 AM AEST
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what are you describing here, depression? repression? either one is very hard to escape from.....
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Re: Behind these Walls
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:43:18 AM AEST
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We never really escape anything, whether is is literal wall, or emotional walls. No matter where we try to run to the problem is still inside us and goes right along with us. Maybe you need to rethink escape and try another approach to the solution. Just a suggestion.
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