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How Do You Summize A Man.
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GG
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:22:36 PM in AEST
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When in my mind and heart the moon and sun rises and falls in the heart of his soul and for me he has ingrained thus into mine as well.
When i am feeling scared and my life is not going so well I call upon him for just the tone of his voice can rise me back up from my moments of despair cause for me in my world this man truly cares.
The road to my upbringing was long and hard upon him for in my life i have committed many sins,
I was the bad boy on the block for the path i was on i didn't care I lived my life through drinks and swears
But Dad you didn't give up on me you continued to pour your heart and soul into mine continuing to believe in me and Prayed for me to change my destiny.
You stood by me strong and tall and lifted me up whenever i would fall.
So this is my summization of a man For many years later my heart and soul now proudly understands....
Dedicated to my father Roland Rioux Writting by GG
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GG
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Re: How Do You Summize A Man.
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:28:06 PM AEST
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Very fine tribute to your father.
Very good work of art. If more parents were like your father theis world wouldn't have so many desperate children out going nuts for lack of understanding.
luv, huggs,
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Re: How Do You Summize A Man.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:32:45 PM AEST
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I can summarize a man like that in one word "hero"! Great father you have there.
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Re: How Do You Summize A Man.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful dedication..... He did a fine job raising you...
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Re: How Do You Summize A Man.
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:26:15 AM AEST
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| Your father must have been a very, very good man and did his duty as a father perfectly. This is a wonderful tribute to him. |
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