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Under the sea
Contributed by
Xenia
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:02:53 PM in AEST
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ChildrensPoetry
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Under the Sea
under the sea
There is no bee like me
Except he, she Marlin and me
Dory goes snorkelling and Nemo goes bowling but what does Marlin do with me?
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Xenia
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2004-03-22 23:02:53]
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Re: Under the sea
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:06:38 PM AEST
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Awwww This is so sweet, Princess!!
I love it!!
I hope to read more from you soon...
(P/S...look out for Marlin..ok)
(((((((((((hugs))))))))))
Jenni |
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Re: Under the sea
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:16:28 PM AEST
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dearest xenia, your poem is great honey, i love it:) keep writing! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Under the sea
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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awww..that was really sweet.
Beautifully done
Little tiny roses for you
Larry |
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Re: Under the sea
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:48:45 AM AEST
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| Hi Xenia, you've written a really sweet and cute poem. Finding Nemo was a really cool movie. Cheers to you. |
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Re: Under the sea
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:12:40 PM AEST
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Hi again, Princess... You should get your Dad to write more....
I am looking forward to your other poem...
Hugs and kisses
Jen |
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Re: Under the sea
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:13:37 PM AEST
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| Hello Xenia and welcome to YPDC! I was so impressed with your talent. You write remarkably well for nine years old. I loved your poem and I can't wait to read the next one! I think i'd like to be Dory cause snorkeling is such fun! You did an awesome job on this one... Kie |
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