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Fire of life
Contributed by
katzie
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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-Life is as a burning fire
Giving you only a small time to accomplish something
-What will you do with it?
Toil in pain in learning a lifetime,
only to die, and forget all?
Put soul and heart into working and building,
only to retire, and watch it fall?
-Flames of life leap and dance before your eyes,
Reminding you of how little time you have left.
-Change to make them like you
Only to tear yourself apart?
Hide yourself from the outside world,
Try and cover the bleeding scars?
-The flames of life work deceptively
Luring you in with warmth and light
Once bring you in.... burn...
New Scars
many more times to wound.
Was it worth it
Copyright ©
katzie
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2004-03-22 22:07:32]
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Re: Fire of life
(User Rating: 1 )
by dead_beauty on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:19:31 PM AEST
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| This is an interesting and I think very beautiful piece. It's very bold. This one reminds me why I love dark poetry so much! :) |
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Re: Fire of life
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:36:23 AM AEST
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LIFE IS TO SHORT,TO WAIT! FANTASTIC MEANING IT HAS SHOWN!! A VERY NICE POEM I MIGHT ADD!!!
DAN!!!! |
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