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Queen Of The Night
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:54:02 PM in AEST
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She is normal through the day,
but once the moon is out
and darkness falls,
she becomes a hungry creature
that can't hide her
hunger for blood.
She roams the
cold, wet streets,
her instincts tell her
there is food nearby.
She can't run away from
her devilish need for fresh meat,
she glances upon a
drunken man on the sidewalk,
she stalks her prey,
like a lion.
He drops his bottle
on the ground,
she swoops in
for the kill.
Her sharp fangs
dig into his neck,
he collapses on the ground.
Her hunger is now fulfilled,
she gets ready
to kill again.
She is the
Queen of the night.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.19/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-03-22 21:54:02]
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:55:36 PM AEST
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SCARY! I HOPE SHE'S NOT OUT EVERY FULL MOON,OR US GUY'S ARE IN BIG TROUBLE!! WICKED POEM - COOL!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:55:49 PM AEST
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| oooo cynthia! really vivid, very good!! lots of vampyres running around:O hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:31:18 PM AEST
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Damn....last time I'll ever walk alone with a snoot full. lol Scarey stuff!!
Very well written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:33:32 PM AEST
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LoL Wild And A Little Wicked
But Awesome Write .....
Loved It.....
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,
I'll Give Ya 5 Stars ... |
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:26:25 PM AEST
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wow Cythia, I didn't know you had it in you!
This was really scary, but then it's suppose to be!
Going in for the Kill...........wowwow
What a line..........all that blood and wine....I mean wine for me. I need a drink after this one
scared the hibby gibbies out of me!
Great Write!
consue
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:12:46 AM AEST
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Larry tottally cracked me up.
Very well said.
she sounds like a bad *** witch. smiles
Very good if ya like vampires she would be the queen of the nite.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by arden on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:56:56 PM AEST
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Awesome! wow this was so good. well done i very much enjoyed it. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Queen Of The Night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:14:23 AM AEST
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A good switch, I might add...
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