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Bloody
Contributed by
Suz
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:52:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Her new silver pen runs
sweetly across her vein.
The valley draws red ink,
which turns orange in the rain.
Her skin is her canvas,
with gray scars and marks to lead,
as she paints herself a picture,
and then she lets the picture bleed.
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-03-22 20:52:17]
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Re: Bloody
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:59:33 PM AEST
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I'm glad to say that this doesn't suck. In fact, I think it's rather good. I like it, even though the subject matter makes me squirm somewhat . . .
Your rhymes are very succinct (what there are of them) and they help bring this poem to life.
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Re: Bloody
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
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This One In Fact Doesn't Suck...
It Was Really A Great Write.
Mine Are The Ones That Suck Lmao..
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Bloody
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:36:51 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful poem. very powerful.
tt |
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