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Conceiving;Then After
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 04:29:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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United making tastful sweet affaire,
The chains do clang of peaceful smiles delight,
And kiss the night away the souls do pair,
The tones as we explore desire tonight,
Combined of body heat produced our slight
and uprising flame;infusion higher,"sigh",
Encased the seedling sleeping nine to plight,
The vow of loves engagement-screeching cry,
The song of weeping children;ours of nigh.
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2002-09-18 16:29:17]
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Re: Conceiving;Then After
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by RealCrystal on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 08:14:25 PM AEST
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great use of past and present vocabulary
it made me think and I really like it |
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Re: Conceiving;Then After
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by mckayla on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 07:23:19 PM AEST
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I agree with the last comment! well written
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