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Antipathy

Contributed by Eve on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:39:14 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic



There's no welcome for her wherever she goes
Can't she be a child still and care nothing of it?
Against her own will it hurts her so
That she's never found a place to truly fit.

She could never admit it to anyone to their face
If anyone had waited she'd have shown she had a heart.
Yet no one gave her that mercy or grace
And that realization tore her apart.

She's so tired of being different from you
She'll always be, but she knows you don't care.
You don't know how easy it is, but she'll say 'I do'
She knows that humanity is uncaring and unfair.

She hates herself for being vulnerable and hurt
Wishing she could've stopped her birth.
She'd rather be buried deep in dirt
Than recognize she's been abandoned on earth.

No one's ever lent her sympathy or pity
They care too much of their own well being.
They'd rather ignore that unknown entity
And forever stay oblivious and unseeing.

There are so many people who die this way
And society rarely throws them a mere glance.
We'll forever wander listlessly from night to day
Wondering if we'll ever get our chance.




Copyright © Eve ... [ 2004-03-22 15:39:14]
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Re: Antipathy (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:50:09 PM AEST
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good write, and so true too.......good insight


Re: Antipathy (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 04:40:19 PM AEST
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Deep, thought-provoking, and just downright great writing. Every word of this is so true, and it'll probably never change.

Keep writing or run out of chocolate,
-V.S.




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