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Tormented Soul
Contributed by
silent
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:08:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have captured the most beautiful lady, one has ever seen
Saved if you will, from the depths of despair
Even just sitting here, I can see her youthful innocence
It’s an eternal image burned so deep, within my very essence
Blue eyes of such wonderment
Dark brown hair, beautifully draped around petite shoulders
Her smile so pure and childlike
Enveloping ones mind, she is for me, perfect
Taking my hand, drifting away from the darkness and hate
Looking back from outside the shadows
My time is served, but I still reside, unable to leave
She is so free spirited and happy, so full of life
From within I smile, more radiant than our life giving star
Yet outside I keep hidden, cannot let others see, never the real me
She can sense my pain, like a songbird without a voice
All I want to see is her happiness, dance my princess, never stop
Remaining awake, trapped under a smothering cloud of darkness
Never escaping, my mind is under lock and key, sing my angel, never stop
She loves me so much and I do her, words cannot convey the torment I feel
A single tear all I can shed, writing, sitting here, thinking of her……..
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silent
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2004-03-22 11:08:26]
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Re: Tormented Soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:42:28 AM AEST
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this is a really heart felt poem i can't believe over 30 people have read it and no ones told you so! good write.
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Re: Tormented Soul
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:19:31 AM AEST
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This is a great poem from a hurt soul. Keep it up, because your poems are really straight from the heart.
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