|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Silver Wedding Anniversary
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:32:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Silver Wedding Anniversary
Day after day
Week in - week out
Months passing by
Yet another year
Cold food - same time
same lack (of taste)
Beyond appetite
Dirty socks - same place (more or less)
same smell
Tons of them
*
...Endless whining...
- somewhere...
toppled over the edge of my consciousness...
Please...say sómething..anything..?
- wherever you are...
STUFF IT
TUMBLE OVER THEM
Mmm..sweet, young - quiet - embrace
Devouring sugary Cartland with even sweeter - understanding - Osbourne
*
Who is it
- constantly invading my peace?
Who is it
- grumbling behind the daily news?
Never seductive silk
Never revealing roses
On this lonely way
*
...Delirious..wandering..lost..who...
...where am I...
The cool, silken touch of your hand - guides me
...Anxious..struggling..naked..how...
...falling..no..I...
The steady, rocky hold of your arms - shelters me
*
It's Me and You
You and Me it is
Just Us
On this lonely way
Together
Copyright ©
Hurretje
... [
2004-03-22 06:32:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Silver Wedding Anniversary
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dina on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:35:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Are you sure it is only a silver anniversary? It seems like forever and ever. Anyway, really felt and really strong. |
|
|
Re: Silver Wedding Anniversary
(User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:25:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was a good poem...it sounds very frustrating but yet there seems to be happiness^_^
luv always |
|
|
Re: Silver Wedding Anniversary
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:38:49 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Sweetly wrapped..thoughts paraded in a rhythmic way..good free verse. venkat |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
