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Missing
Contributed by
Dina
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:29:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I used to live happily among my friends
I used to have a life of my own full of things
Bits and pieces all around
it is not just the ground
it is more of a bond
that I had
that I shared.
Now, I still have my life of course
but not as I really thought
what ever I saw
what ever I bought,
It is nothing
really nothing
like being at home.
I am not really sad
I am just missing what I had
I miss friends, family, gatherings
I miss my home, my granny, my uncles
I miss the parties
I miss the fun
I even miss the trouble
that sometimes occurred.
My country
what a beautiful word
what a beautiful meaning
that I never thought about
till that moment of lonliness.
I miss you all
My Friends.
Copyright ©
Dina
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2004-03-22 06:29:08]
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Re: Missing
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:35:25 AM AEST
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What a nice and touching poem, Dina.
Keep up the good work!
Hur |
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Re: Missing
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:03:12 AM AEST
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THAT IS SO SWEET! YOU DON'T SOUND SELFISH AT ALL!! THAT'S WHAT MAKES YOU SUCH A SPECIAL PERSON!!! I LOVED THE POEM!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Missing
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:37:57 AM AEST
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| That's a lovely poem Dina....touching and full of longing, great to read. |
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