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My Eternal Journey
Contributed by
Lia
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Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 06:33:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to surf on the whisper of the wind
Feel the gentleness of the rain beating against my flesh
Blissfully bounce in the clouds up high
Let my hair cling to my face as I dance in the ocean
Baske in the sun from atop the hightest mountain
Soar through the air on the wings of a dove
Release my fears to a raging waterfall
Sink my feet into the beauty of a rainbow
Live a life of luxury on a deserted island
Press my fingerprints into the core of the earth
And spend eternity sharing it all with you...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2002-09-18 06:33:23]
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Re: My Eternal Journey
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 06:51:38 AM AEST
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| How absolutely perfect that sounds... If the position isn't filled I'll apply. Nice write. |
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Re: My Eternal Journey
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 07:27:15 AM AEST
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| great write Lia, if we only could feel that paradise now, |
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Re: My Eternal Journey
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by MisterRight on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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great write lia, sounds great. can i come?
curtis |
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Re: My Eternal Journey
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 11:34:35 AM AEST
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Lovely imagery, Lia...... perfect setting...
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Re: My Eternal Journey
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 12:58:34 PM AEST
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| very pretty |
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Re: My Eternal Journey
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 01:56:32 AM AEST
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Your usual high standard Lia...this has such beautiful imagery.
I hope you're keeping ok? Love Chrissie x |
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