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A Friend's Death
Contributed by
Corruptor
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Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 06:16:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Your strength slowly abandons you
As your illness becomes stronger.
Your breathing weakens
(I can barely hear it now),
As you look at me with your once bright eyes
And tell me not to worry.
There is no other sound in the room
Save for my prayers,
And my weeping.
Your words trail off and your fingers
Grow cold in my hand.
The rose on your windowpane
Bows down to you and sheds its petals –
It refuses to live without you,
To be more beautiful than you.
Death crushes my heart
As I am left cold, and alone.
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Corruptor
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2002-09-18 06:16:38]
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Re: A Friend's Death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 08:52:16 AM AEST
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| This is sad. Sorry for your loss. You've done a wonderful way of conveying your feelings and I'm sure your friend would be proud. |
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Re: A Friend's Death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 01:01:47 PM AEST
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this is beautiful kwsta... the idea of the rose bowing down is lovely...
myrts |
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Re: A Friend's Death
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by Corruptor on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 03:21:03 PM AEST
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Thank you. The rose has an extremely important meaning to it. I'll tell you another time.
Corruptor |
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Re: A Friend's Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 01:13:16 PM AEST
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| yes, plz do tell me kwsta... email me... |
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Re: A Friend's Death
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:47:45 PM AEST
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| Really sad and beautiful... good writing! |
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