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Pretty snowflakes in flight
Contributed by
AliB
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:30:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Ice crystals form
On branches bare
You can feel the chill
In the wintry air
The clouds get lower
Fuller and dark
Ready to offload
And make their mark
Snowflakes start falling
So pretty and light
They drift in the breeze
Makes everything white
As it settles
Much thicker now
It’s still coming down
Bigger flakes tumble
All the way to the ground
Where are the pathways
The roads and the steps?
They’re hidden from sight
In the cold snowy depths
Spider’s webs highlighted
As the snow finally stops
Icicles hang from trees and rooftops
Robins fly in
Puff out their redbreasts
They’re a real treat to see
Our wintry guests
The snows here to stay
For some time I assume
Hope not for too long
I don’t want the flu
A beautiful sight
A blanket of white
It fell from a height
Pretty snowflakes in flight
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AliB
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by Kie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 07:03:26 PM AEST
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| What a great imagination you have! The imagery was so beautiful. Kie |
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 07:49:35 PM AEST
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Great Write
I'll Have To Agree 100%
With Kie....
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:36:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem... love the imagary too...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:29:17 AM AEST
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| Well I hope its not here to stay for too long I'm sick of it! My kids are all sick again I need spring quick! Christina |
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:05:05 AM AEST
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with the recent snow i thought of doing a serious write honest! but i just couldn't get the imagery as i wanted it you have done this perfectly
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:25:55 AM AEST
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I love the snow. You captured all the magic and mystery in this Ali, lovely poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Pretty snowflakes in flight
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:51:24 PM AEST
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a beautiful picture.. made me shiver lol..
charlotte x_x_x |
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