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I Am One, I Am Humanity
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:24:42 PM in AEST
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I am one,
I am humanity,
am I done,
am I to be.
I live once,
in many splintered minds,
in separate bodies of flesh,
that decays over time,
I forget a lot,
of what I once knew,
lost to death,
except for records kept,
many thoughts,
none converge,
many feelings,
interlocked but diverse,
many visions,
all different confused,
many voices,
all discordant confound,
many beliefs,
inherently unsound.
Now I live in many bodies,
made of flesh and metal parts,
but in one mind single conscience,
united by proton sparks,
I live forever eternally,
unbothered by time,
I know all omniscience,
remembering all things,
many minds,
but one thought,
many hearts,
but one feeling,
many eyes,
but one vision,
many mouths,
but one voice,
one belief,
and one choice.
I am one,
I am humanity,
am I done,
am I to be?
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Re: I Am One, I Am Humanity
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by Dralion on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:27:51 PM AEST
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I've often wondered if it may be possible to put a consciousness into a computer, or some sort of robot.
This may be a look at such a concept.
I'd consider it. |
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Re: I Am One, I Am Humanity
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by Kie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:12:52 PM AEST
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| This was philosophical and deep. Sort of a poem to look outside the box so to speak. Very interesting to say the least. Well done... Kie |
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Re: I Am One, I Am Humanity
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:55:02 PM AEST
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I don't believe you can find 2 humans living on this planet that would agree to everything. For all concious human thought to be combined would, in itself, cause an apocalypse. The diversity on men on this planet alone would stop any A.I. from ever being completed. It is a great write though and a thought-provoking idea.
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