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Nightwalker
Contributed by
Dralion
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:22:26 PM in AEST
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Dark rage
where a soul
should be.
Vengance
replacing compassion.
Seek out
those who cursed me.
To live
in this limbo.
Dead
but alive.
Her memories
haunt me
fuel me.
They must all die
so I may die.
And join her.
Where we can be
together forever.
Copyright ©
Dralion
... [
2004-03-21 16:22:26]
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Re: Nightwalker
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:37:38 PM AEST
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| Slightly simple and absolutely dark. But I guess it appeals to me...nice one in my opinions. |
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Re: Nightwalker
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:42:32 PM AEST
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Dalion you did just great on this one.
Simplicity is a touch of beauty.
Dark poetry not my choice, but
this one I at least understand....that's really
something for me.
I thought this write was grand
lovingcritters
consue
I give you a big hand! |
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Re: Nightwalker
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 05:14:09 PM AEST
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| i loooooove dark poetry, so this appealed to me big time, i enjoyed this a lot! good job! |
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Re: Nightwalker
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:18:17 AM AEST
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Just a few words that hit like a hammer and say so much! So wonderful!
Hur
Keep on going like this! |
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Re: Nightwalker
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2011 @ 04:44:34 PM AEST
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| I think you did a pretty good job on this poem, excellent rhyming words, but I feel like there was something missing here. Not sure what, or why, but just something. Keep up the good work though, because you've got some real talent going for you here. Take care. |
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