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Leaves
Contributed by
AliB
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:03:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Leaves fall to the ground
And they do not make a sound
Falling all around
Copyright ©
AliB
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2004-03-21 15:03:52]
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Re: Leaves
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:23:47 PM AEST
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Great first attempt!! You have painted a lovely picture with the few words that the Haiku allows. No, it does not have to rhyme.
Well done!!
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Re: Leaves
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:12:31 AM AEST
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i havn't got a clue about haiku do you have it with fish? but your poem makes sense to me!
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Re: Leaves
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:27:54 AM AEST
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I cant do haiku poetry, not my thing at all. This was really good for a first try though, very expressive.
Love Dawny x |
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