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NUMB
Contributed by
justinblue
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:50:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sitting, waiting on the cure
Of all this that is unpure
Killing time till time kills you
Rapidly slideing into a pit
Suffering blow after blow hit after hit
The answer is out there
But numb, you sit
With a blank stare
It's just to much to bare
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justinblue
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2004-03-21 13:50:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: NUMB
(User Rating: 1 ) by perfection on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:57:09 PM AEST (User
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Short and simple, but sweet.
Good Write!
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Re: NUMB
(User Rating: 1 ) by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:43:40 PM AEST (User
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i thought the same thing when i read it too =) short and sweet, i liked this one a lot, great job |
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