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Can i come over?
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:23:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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HA HA
heard you laugh
fascination grows
have a vision in my mind
we kiss when we are alone
can i come over?
there are rainbows in your eyes
lips so sweet so oh....
when you say my name
wanna hold you all night long
thoughts of you make me sigh
feelings ebb and flow
you are thee one that i adore
can i walk you home?
HA HA
heard you laugh
fascination is strong
have a
vision
in my mind
we kiss when we are alone
can i come over?
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secretwind
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2004-03-21 13:23:32]
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Re: Can i come over?
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:29:44 PM AEST
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Wow now, this is very tantalizing.....
It rocks!
Luv the happy, jolly thing.
Luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks again for the write in my honor. |
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Re: Can i come over?
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by GrayStar_909 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:17:36 AM AEST
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| hi, this is a good poem I like it..... =) |
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Re: Can i come over?
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:27:15 AM AEST
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| thats really cute.... and sweet ... i love it!! |
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