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I am Sin
Contributed by
unprettyxsongbird
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 12:27:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I stare into the mirror of my sin
Blocking out the dark shapes shifting behind me
In all my lethargy this still has to be done
If only I could wipe out the mistakes
Life could have been so different
The girl looking back at me from the glass
Is red and tainted, against a backdrop of flames
I wish she would die, I have to kill her
She did this to me, she did it
I fall sobbing to the ground
What am I saying? I want to kill my past?
It’s all said and gone now, which is worse
Because I am unforgivable
I raise a shaking fist and with all my remaining strength
Pummel the mirror, tearing my flesh
And it shatters into 1000 pieces before me
The girl has gone now, but to where?
I look down at my hands, knuckles bleeding
And I realise, that no matter how hard I try
I will always be that girl
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Re: I am Sin
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST
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This is such a strong emotional write, i was moved to the depth of my being when i read this.
Excellent write, and I can relate wholeheartedly. |
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Re: I am Sin
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by luckycharm on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:16:02 PM AEST
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Hey, we all feel like that sometimes and u should not blame yourself for that. When u look into that mirror, u should see that the person on the other side loves you on the inside and out. I wan't u to know that this life may be hard, but we have to live it until we go and be with god. If u need to talk to
me, my email address is: Nicole88622003@yahoo.com. Your poem was well
written.-luckycharm. |
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