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Whispered memories
Contributed by
silent
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:06:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dancing through streets of steel
Pounding into depths of pain
Your sunlit eyes blind to feel
Singing soul within a glass box
Untouched by human hands, whispered memories
Monsters eyes gazing through
Piercing the darkest torch, unseeing, unsensing
Ruby red lips, curled, softly touching the harshness of reality
Teasing the fleeting dream of death
Silence stopping the strongest heart but for a moment
Settling within, losing the grip of a childlike fantasy
Time but a memory, for i, you
Are alive, in a timeless plain
Your face paints the shadow
Framed on my wall
I will show you the colour of my mirror
Brush your hair carefully
I will take your makeup off slowly
You shall taste my wardrobe
For inside i wear black
And so shall you
Forever....
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silent
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2004-03-21 11:06:43]
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Re: Whispered memories
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:10:59 AM AEST
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Wow!! I really liked it! Very well written!
Anne :D |
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Re: Whispered memories
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:21:03 PM AEST
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| oh...i don't know what to say...this is incredible, one of the most amazing poems i have ever read...beautiful... |
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Re: Whispered memories
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by PoetryLover72 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:01:02 PM AEST
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| Good job, interesting. Very well written. |
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Re: Whispered memories
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:44:38 PM AEST
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| I LOVE it!!!! You shouldn't doubt yourself. (sure, lol, I'm one to talk!) But I really like your poem. The woprds... it's hard to explain. O well, Great job! |
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Re: Whispered memories
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by Justalady on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:20:28 AM AEST
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| Though deep it is revealing... a lot of good writing here. |
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