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if i never met that star
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:05:07 AM in AEST
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If I never dreamth
if I never slept
if I never wept
I'd never know life
I'd never know you
because when I dream I dream of you
and when I wished it came true
your everything I want
I know wanting isn't need
you do anything to please
I do anything to thank
because when I make mistakes your arms take me back
and it's right there where I plan to stay
because I wouldn't have it any other way...
You were the star I wished on
you were the star that shot then crashed
you are the star that made my dark cloud smash!!!
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2004-03-21 10:05:07]
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Re: if i never met that star
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:10:47 AM AEST
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Wonderful!! Amazing poem! I really loved it because it has a really positive attitude. Very well expressed! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: if i never met that star
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 12:30:13 PM AEST
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| really good... the first verse could stand alone if you wanted it to.... love it. |
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Re: if i never met that star
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by ammalu on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 06:05:02 AM AEST
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| A Good expression, realy it's a dream-wanting is not need still WISH is for ever. |
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Re: if i never met that star
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:48:44 PM AEST
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| yet another great one by you! |
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