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I WANT TO LET GO
Contributed by
desire
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:28:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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will there ever be a time for me,
when i wont feel we are destined to be.
its been about 20 years that you've held my heart,
and 10 years of being together and apart.
i wish my love for you would come to and end.
i need a chance to love again.
i feel like im chained to the bottom of the sea,
my love for you is weakening me.
i always keep room or some sort of hope,
and that's the thing that helps me cope.
any man that comes into my space,
automatically knows you have a place.
why cant i let go and love another guy.
why wont my heart let me try.
you are my first love & my first kiss,
what we shared was pure bliss.
i have to let you go, first in my mind then in my heart,
i need to make a fresh new start.
i want to let the love of another in my life again,
but i scared my heart wont let him in.
will i compare him to you and give him a chance,
will he make me love him an make my heart dance.
will i unknowingly and slowly let you go,
will my heart not yearn for you any mo.
will he win my heart and we become one,
will i want your touch when all is said and done.
the answer i will live upon along the way,
and i will take it day for day.
and hope that fate will also be kind
and allow me to have a love without you on my mind
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desire
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2004-03-21 09:28:01]
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Re: I WANT TO LET GO
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:04:58 AM AEST
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What a poem! Very well expressed. Hope all your wishes come true. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: I WANT TO LET GO
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by THUGPASSION on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:14:46 AM AEST
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| WOW I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT SUM1 N MY LIFE MY BEST FRIEND HOOKED UP WIT MY EX BUT I STILL LOVE HIM TODAY THEY HAD A 5 YEAR RELATIONSHIP AN NOW THEY'ER JUST FRIENDS BUT SHE STILL LOVE HIM BUT SHE WONT TELL ME THAT BUT SHE DONT NO I STILL LOVE HIM 2 AN I PRETEND DAT I HATE HIM BUT ITS NOT REALLY HATE ITS LOVE I JUST CANT DO ANY THING BOUT IT.. ANY ADVICE??? |
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Re: I WANT TO LET GO
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by uchendu on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:40:13 AM AEST
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| Gat to get over this through poetry... |
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Re: I WANT TO LET GO
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:14:21 PM AEST
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| well good - felt like i could imagine the situation |
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