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Change The Record, Why Don't You?
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:43:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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it that what you think,
deep inside of you,
well then you're just horrid!
you don't under-stand what i'm going through!
you don't need to say it,
i can see it in your eyes,
don't think i'm blind!
you can't hide from you dark disguise!
i am hurting,
but of coarse you wouldn't understand!
because you're just so perfect,
you've never been unable to stand!
you've never had your problems,
you've never hit rock bottom!
no of coarse you wouldn't have,
because inside you not rotten!
why don't you change "your" record!
why not give me some space!
why not let me be?
why not,
GET OUT OF MY FACE!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-03-21 08:43:09]
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Re: Change The Record, Why Don't You?
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by spider on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:32:11 AM AEST
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| i love this, felt like it so many times! really well written. am hoping u dont mind but i am goignt o show this to my friends as a hint. |
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Re: Change The Record, Why Don't You?
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:32:54 AM AEST
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Whoa! Very well written expressive poem! Sometimes I wish to say these words to some persons but what can we do? Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Change The Record, Why Don't You?
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by silent on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:11:40 AM AEST
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| hell yeah, i mean straight to the point, hmm i love it..... :) |
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