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HE JUST WALKED AWAY
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 06:02:25 AM in AEST
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Contributed by emystar on Monday, May 20 2002 @ 16:44:18 CDT
With his heart open
he begged for her love
wanting her again but
he didn't shove....
Remember when we first wed?
She listened but her love was dead...
Crying he had his say
then he just walked away.
She had known someday he'd cry,
would be sorry by-n-by.
Once she longed to hear him say,
"I want you and need you,
there's no other way".
Then he just walked away.........
Years since they parted.
Alone she was broken hearted,,
so much in tween time.
He told her of his luv genuine.
With tears in his eyes he tried
but knew her love had died.
Should have thought fore he strayed,
in someone's else bed laid.....
No thought of his kids-n-her
or how much he'd been needed there..
For her healing had come
in two daughters-n-a son.
Copyright © emystar ...
Monday, May 20 2002 @ 16:44:18 CDT
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-03-21 06:02:25]
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:36:00 AM AEST
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Oh wow what a song! It was so sad! Glad for the ending! Amazing write! Keep it up!
Anne :D:D |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:37:39 AM AEST
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| aww this is sad lifes tough its a shame. but i still liked the poem |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:53:18 AM AEST
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| I love the poem. Powerful and painful too. I just wish they could have worked it out. Huggs...Russ |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by Kie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:18:04 PM AEST
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| You are one strong woman and this was awesome to read. Kie |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 01:48:58 AM AEST
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| Aww very sad departing..but any way her healing had come through children.. venkat |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:38:08 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE YOU'RE A GREAT MOTHER,
PERSON,& A FANTASTIC POET! THAT WAS SO NEAT HOW YOU FIT THAT ALL TOGETHER!! HIS LOSS YOUR GAIN EVEN IF IT COST YOU SOME PAIN!!! GOD BLESS YOU & YOUR CHILDREN!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:51:14 AM AEST
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Great Write Although I'll Have To Agree
With Dan. ( His Loss Your Gain )..
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,, |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by silent on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:10:48 PM AEST
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Such i heartfelt write, i love it.
Beautiful ending. |
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Re: HE JUST WALKED AWAY
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by AaroKeith on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 11:43:35 PM AEST
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| I really like these lyrics |
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