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A FEEL FOR WHAT'S REAL
Contributed by
rhymeandreason
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:50:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have a feel for what's real,
and a taste for the fantasy.
I can see through most deals,
though most times I'll just let it be.
I've a sense of the truth,
unlike most it doesn't frighten me.
I can still hear the voice of my youth,
my life echo, calling out to me.
..................................................................................
SO
They alledge,
while I assert.
The truth they hedge.
'Cause truth can hurt.
The plans they've made,
with folks they know.
So truth they trade,
for status quo.
So, come on in!
Let's make a deal.
Give this for that.
Affix laws seal.
Record the time.
The date, the place.
The Deal is struck!
Quick! Hide your face.
...................................................................................
They thought it would be so simple.
Thought it would be a cinch.
They'd pop me like a pimple,
with just one pinch.
The truth ain't taking a dive.
The truth ain't taking the fall.
Lie will be lucky to surrive.
Probably the reason they stall.
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rhymeandreason
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2004-03-21 04:50:28]
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Re: A FEEL FOR WHAT'S REAL
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:39:03 AM AEST
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A really thoughtful poem wonderfully written! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: A FEEL FOR WHAT'S REAL
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by Kie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:26:21 PM AEST
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| You tell em! May the underdog always win! You expressed yourself clearly and well in this one and I loved it! Kie |
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