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Without you
Contributed by
cheech
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:04:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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all of your fears are gonna keep me around
for years,so many days with you but not
really,you're afraid of being lost
i'm afraid,i am afraid to be lost
how much pain is this gonna cost
i'm so cold,i feel like jack frost
i'm crazy without you,i'm afraid
without you,i feel the pain without you
without you,why couldn't i have stayed
i swear on my life i need you to
survive,i've never had the oppertunity to
strive for your love
i can leave this door open just for you
welcome you back to this room
you're so smart,you always knew what to do
we can go under has lover
we can go under has friends
when we go under we're still above
i'm crazy without you,i'm afraid
without you,i feel the pain without you
without you,why couldn't i have stayed
remember this night,we've spent so
many similar nights together,oh
but now i have a feeling this nights are over
as i watch this fire
my hopes and dreams have
became a greater desire
what more could i have
without you (repeat 4x)
Copyright ©
cheech
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2004-03-21 03:04:57]
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Re: Without you
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:49:56 AM AEST
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| this reminds me of me...and I don't like myself. good lyrics though... |
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Re: Without you
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:51:45 AM AEST
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Hi cheech, where's chong?
Up in smoke that's where my money goes.....
Very good work here.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Without you
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:44:09 AM AEST
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Oh what a sad bitter poem! Love can be such a hurtful thing! Very well expressed! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Without you
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by luckycharm on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:11:19 AM AEST
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| I like this alot. You express the way u feel and u let yourself breathe. Keep up the good work. It is always good to let your emotions out.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Without you
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by Coaster on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:30:57 PM AEST
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| I'm feelin it. Good choice of words. Haha I'm liking your screen name too. |
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