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Contributed by cheech on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:03:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

changing the way i feel
totally changing my deal
i made,i'm over you
i'm so over you,you won't know what to do

thinking back,to a time in life
when i was always depressed
listening to you,thats why,we've been through
some heavy ****,you may not want to live

just remember,when one day you're looking back
and you wish you had that one chance
i'm not worried even though i've liked for always and always and forever
but my heart is already way to crowded,so **** off

you may not like the words i speak,but i don't ***** care
cuz i know i'm here and you're there with your selfish little *****
of a girlfriend,look at me,does it look like i give two ******* *****??

i may not like you,but i also may not hate,your just like my dad
i don't know what to think of ya most times,i hope you're glad
cuz right now i can tell ya i'm so ******* mad

just remember,when one day you're looking back
and you wish you had that one chance
i'm not worried even though i've liked for always and always and forever
but my heart is already way to crowded,so **** off(**** off)-repeat 2x

that night i was **** drunk you actually seemed like you cared
what was that all about?was it something that i shared??
it wasn't my booze?he never cared,no no no no no,never cared

****,***** drunk i wish i could have said something to **** you off
i want you so bad,but yet i feel like i could wait a few thousand years
why must you always think you're so tough?
why can't i realize any of my fears?

Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-03-21 03:03:07]
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Re: Crowded (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:29:35 PM AEST
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thats a good question. i have kind of hazy understanding of this because of all the "*" though.

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