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HIs Voice Elates Me
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:48:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My lover’s voice is smooth
as pencil lead on paper when
he whispers his love,
“meri biwi,” “meri jaan,”
I carry these sounds as the day
runs on, wistfully breathing
those endearments to myself,
reliving the tingling champagne
sensation. His voice undulates
like lapping waves massaging
a sandy beach, or his deft digits
caressing my spine. His voice - oh
that voice! The melodious rise
and fall of the pitch, the vibrato
of his baritone voice evokes tears.
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Jessica_Saini
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2004-03-20 22:48:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: HIs Voice Elates Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Qohinoor on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:56:24 AM AEST (User
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Hmmmmm, well composed-I suppose you used words from Hindi in this one? |
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