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Keep it to yourself
Contributed by
hope82
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:12:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I sit on our crooked worn out stairs I wonder what is going to become of me?
I work to provide for my family but can,t seem to make ends meet.
Too scared to speak for fear I will be belittled once again.
What is going to happen next?
I seem to always be in a rut.
My dreams seem shattered and way out of sight.
I look at my life and all I see is fright.
I can,t seem to do anything right.
I,ll keep it inside for now maybe oneday I will be able to speak.
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Re: Keep it to yourself
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by apollo on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:25:24 PM AEST
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| dont keep it in for too long or else something bad may happen! very well put and i hear your feelings. i hope all goes well, hang in there! |
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Re: Keep it to yourself
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:40:08 PM AEST
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well written ...but to hold it in for too long is not good...
Shari |
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Re: Keep it to yourself
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by luckycharm on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:25:14 AM AEST
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Hey, this is luckycharm. Your poem is very nice.
Keep up the good work.-Luckycharm |
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Re: Keep it to yourself
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:55:35 PM AEST
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Things will get better, I'm sure.. just talk it out... It's never good to keep things bottled up inside..
Jenni |
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