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Keep Your Gob Closed.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:01:18 PM in AEST
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I close my eyes,
in come's, what i despise.
it's what's called my life.
it's leaves me blind,
but still seeing scary minds,
and hearing broken rhymes,
and still witnessing to many crimes.
i keep my gob shut,
it's wrong, and it's tough,
but i can't release,
i don't lie, about what i see!
it'll be denied,
leaving me, no-where to hide,
for when hard people come...
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2004-03-20 19:01:18]
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Re: Keep Your Gob Closed.
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:03:51 PM AEST
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What a poem! I lived the way you put the words. Frustration comes out of this poem and bitterness. Great write!
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Re: Keep Your Gob Closed.
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by Destiny on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:29:27 PM AEST
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This has alot of raw emotion, I like it alot.
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