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Ode to my cat
Contributed by
Necromant
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:37:09 PM in AEST
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Every morning I wake up with a burden on my legs,
Oh! It’s the cat, I soon realise as she scratches one of my hands,
She purrs quietly when I stroke her greyish/black soft pelt,
While looking smugly, with her green eyes, at my new formed welt
Pride would soon be forgotten when hunger changes her mood,
Her eyes would shine with a tinge of misery, begging me for food
Once fed and sated, on my comfy pillow she’ll spend her midday nap,
Until she sense me in front of the computer, ah then she’ll jump into my lap
And to end this ode to my dear cat, these words I shall say,
“If you’ll soak my rug again, dearly you’ll have to pay!”
Copyright ©
Necromant
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by bernard on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:41:40 PM AEST
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| As a Cat lover I can emote with your feelings.thanks for a cute poem from bernard. |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 05:28:24 PM AEST
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| Awwww this was so sweet. Kie |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:11:26 PM AEST
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Ah yes, those adorable felines. We don't train them, they train us. Mine is a perfect lady and has taught me to respond very well to her needs. This is an adorable write.
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by AliB on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:21:34 PM AEST
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Oh yes, very good. I used to have 4 cats but sadly I've only 2 now, Cassie is 12 and cheeky is 6, they are adorable creatures.One of my first poems is called Cats. I love them. Good poem.
Ali xx |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:38:22 PM AEST
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| I can never understand this obsession that people have for cats. I find it troublesome enough dealing with people issues than to add another slew of pitfalls to leap into. But anyhow...quaint, wistful and nice... but I still don't like cats.. no matter how cute and playful your wonderful poetry makes it seem. |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by faithmairee on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:42:25 AM AEST
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very cute and humerous...i can visualize this very well only i have two dogs one of which wakes me up sticking his cold nose in my face until i wake up...i liked your poem a lot.
faith |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 01:45:21 AM AEST
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Glad that you have shared this ode
venkat |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:43:09 PM AEST
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| oooh dear! what can I say? I am watching cat&dog at the moment!(*shivers*)..... hehehe, just kidding, very cute and the last line made me smile, thanks!^_^ |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:15:25 PM AEST
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| lol, there is some stuff called goo gone that smells great and takes even *that outta the rug, your kitty sounds like a lill tiger, lol, we have quite a few of them up here and i love all of mine as well, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Merry on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:56:22 PM AEST
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I love cats and I have only one very old gray cat left - and she is a demanding princess who thinks the bed belongs to her and wakes us promptly at light of day demanding to be fed with her annoying mewling.
Love your poem - all cat lovers will relate to this one
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:08:14 AM AEST
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Very good and I do know what cha mean.
I have a momma cat with kittens ready to give away .
Also My cat adopted two kittens that aren't hers. My friend big lab dog brounght to her and they were only a few days old. She figured my momma cat had kittens so she called me. We adopted them but they are fine. I feed them between meals with a shot needle thingy. they seem to never get enuff to eat. They have their eyes open now and move around alot but they're still little.
Luved this as my kittens try to get up here and type like mom.
Luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:23:33 AM AEST
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love 'em i've got three of them myself!
so a big furry hello from mitzy, tango and breezer! oh good poem by the way!
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:45:18 AM AEST
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I'm a cat lover too! I love this! Please check out my poem "morning" on the same topic. *smiles* We'll have to talk felines sometime. Mine sleeps on me as well.
Stitch |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:45:41 AM AEST
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O, this is so sweet! Your words are so descriptive that this poem displays like a movie for me. Thought about going to the cinema tonight..well I have already been there now! Great work.
Hur |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:27:48 PM AEST
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:D
I like cats, and this was a great and accurate tribute to them all.
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by Kittenfantastico on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:38:20 PM AEST
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| Reminds me of my cat, LOL. I love this. |
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Re: Ode to my cat
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:51:12 AM AEST
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lol!! As my cat is a white long haired furball... She gets her revenge by pulling out her own hair and leaving it all over my bed. The side effect is that she's bald in most places she can reach with her mouth.
Great poem to a great species.
Jaime |
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