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Broken Eternal Love
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:33:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i looked you in the eye
And told you the reason why
I love you so much
Because of your touch
And that night i cant erase
The kiss i can still taste
You liked me
I thought that was the case
And when i look at your face
Its Ineffeble,
Your undescribable beauty
Now im alone in a desolate place
Its to perniciouse to face
I just want you to console me
But that will never be
Because of your friends,
Who just condesend
You dont know how much you hurt me
You have torn my heart in two again
Nothing you do now can make it mend
Theeres no love you can send
Or even be my friend
It wouldnt put it together again
You hurt me so
And just like the falling snow
My sadness will flow
Nothing you say or do
Can take away the pain you put me through
I still love you to
Its something I always knew
And no matter what you do.
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willow_tara72002
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2004-03-20 16:33:20]
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Re: Broken Eternal Love
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:39:54 PM AEST
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Oh what teary poem! I'm so sad for you! I hope you find back your happiness. Great write you really expressed your feelings well!
Anne :D |
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Re: Broken Eternal Love
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by Broken921 on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 06:03:01 AM AEST
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| Wow !! This poem Is really good. |
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