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I'm sad
Contributed by
jonteD
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:25:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm sad, I don't know why,
Feel lonely, I may cry,
Will form myself into a circle.
Hear laughter and it hurts,
Watch boys and girls flirt,
Drowning but no one sees.
Yesterday good, today bad,
Gone off the scale a tad,
Shout but no rescue.
Ignore me I'll go away,
Wont come back another day.
The silence screams, poor lad.
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Re: I'm sad
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by xSexyTexasGuyx on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 05:28:17 PM AEST
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| Good write! Just wait for tomorrow, it can only get better. |
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Re: I'm sad
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by shahan on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:21:33 PM AEST
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I really loved the last three lines.
"Ignore me I'll go away,
Wont come back another day.
The silence screams, poor lad."
excellent!!!!
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Re: I'm sad
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:58:45 PM AEST
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Awwww..... Warm (((hugs)))
Nicely done... Hope you feel better soon.
Jenni |
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Re: I'm sad
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 09:53:18 PM AEST
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Terrific write
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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