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An Ode To An Ice Queen
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Upon icy slopes
caressed by freezing winds
on a frozen mountain top
the Ice Queen holds her court
sitting upon a throne of snow and ice
flanked by icicles as javelin strikes
adorned by jewels of snowy drops
white, delicate, preciously regal
clad in royal garments of pure silver white
made of snowflakes linked by frozen tears
her hair as ebony raven jet black
flowing down beyond cold shoulders
her beauty is etched in ice
a face sculptured to perfection
cold blue-black lips frozen in a smile
mocking, inviting, deathlessly cynical
and her eyes.. oh her terrible eyes..
those twin pools of musty earthly brown
irising upon harsh wintry white orbs
with daggers for looks, an icy cold that freezees souls
but beyond this frozen layer
beneath the icy facade
lies a heart that beats violent thunders
whose caring alone could floor, the oceans of the world
in her gentle tender care
through her wrist-bone breaking lessons
many an errant spaced out cadet
learned to walk, tiptoeing on terestial lands
upon leaving these frozen freezing landscapes
on my way to warmer springtime thaws
I looked fondly to these gentle wintry mountains
where the Ice Queen holds her court.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-03-20 14:20:53]
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Re: An Ode To An Ice Queen
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:31:54 PM AEST
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Amazing poem! You must really be fond of your instructor! Great write enjoyed reading it ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: An Ode To An Ice Queen
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:26:55 PM AEST
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| This was breathtakingly beautiful. One of your best if not your best so far that i've seen. It speaks of your fondness for your friend and mentor. I hope it continues to bloom! This poem was so perfect I wanted it to go on longer! Kie |
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Re: An Ode To An Ice Queen
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:46:06 PM AEST
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Bravo! Bravo!Bravo!
The images that brought life to my Mind's eye were glowing!
Sounded like my mother, BH. "She walks with Hatred!
Guess we all have to have someone like that in our lives to appreciate fully those that are not!
The poem was exceptional in all ways I think
I'm awed at your talent, and your timing and sink
Wonderfully said, and wonderfully finished
Consue |
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