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All About Love
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:57:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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it wasn't hard to fall for you
it's such an easy thing to do
i close my eyes and fantasize
imagining a love so true
i wove a story that would
make Shakespeare sigh
a tender love story
just to make you laugh and cry
i gave you qualities you didn't possess
it was a bit insane i must admit
you say you don't know how
i captured your heart but
you claim it is for keeps
you're not sure how i took control
or knocked you right off of your feet
i wove a story that would
make Shakespeare sigh
a tender love story
just to make you laugh and cry
i gave you qualities you didn't possess
it was a bit insane i must admit
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faithmairee
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2004-03-20 07:57:09]
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Re: All About Love
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:00:33 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem!!!! Loved it! Lol enjoyed the Shakespeare part! Keep writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: All About Love
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:41:03 PM AEST
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| Love.. Love.. Love.. it is a joyful thing indeed... or is it? some pitfalls lies hidden. Anyway... a very playful and jaunty poem. |
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Re: All About Love
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:15:17 PM AEST
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| I have enjoyed every single poem I have read by you. You have a distinct writing style and everything you write flows perfectly. I loved this one about love....Is there anything any greater? Kie |
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