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you wrong me:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:56:39 AM in AEST
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drugabuse
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Cold, hot,
sweet,bitter,
calm, mad.
who is the cheater.
strong,weak,
bored ,dumb
who is that pointing that gun.
night ,day,
I lay awake wondering
if I made a mistake.
yes,no,
as it goes,
yet I really donot know.
yet I love you so, as long as these river flows.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
... [
2004-03-20 06:56:39]
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Re: you wrong me:
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:03:03 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry to read this! The ending is really tearing. Great write espressed you feelings well
Anne :D |
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Re: you wrong me:
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:02:40 PM AEST
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| Another great write! It touched me! Christina |
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