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Burden
Contributed by
monkey
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:15:01 AM in AEST
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*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*
so many thoughts
run
through my
troubled mind
keeping all my feelings
locked up inside
no one knows
how I really feel
or what I'm really like
what to do
when no one listens
Im not sure
I can carry this burden
any longer...
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-03-20 02:15:01]
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Re: Burden
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:49:12 AM AEST
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| Let go, stop hiding who you are. Let it out through words and actions, and never be afraid of the truth. Blaa blaa blaa... |
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Re: Burden
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:47:43 AM AEST
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| look them in the eye..and say LISTEN PLEASE...I would like to be heard...I have something to share. If that doesn't work...wear a big red clown nose. Just joking. I liked your poem it said a lot in few lines...sharing, caring...really good. |
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Re: Burden
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by Arius-Inues on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:47:58 AM AEST
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| If you dont want that clown nose can I have it? lol j/k. I know how you feel because I do the same thing, but I hide my true self and noone gets me( with the exception of the ppl on this site cuz they read my poems) but very well written, Tony |
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Re: Burden
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by jamsters on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:35:07 PM AEST
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~monkey
don't i know u?
~jamsters |
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Re: Burden
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:04:49 PM AEST
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| hello missy monkay? remeber mister baboon? he is there waiting and listening!^_^ |
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