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To an old flame
Contributed by
Sarafina
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:03:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Every time I think of you
I remember the good times
When you were still mine
The little things you use to do
I'll never forget you
People say that it was bad
They never saw the good
The way you'd hold me
The way we made love
At times the pleasure was worth all the pain
But now the pleasure begins to fade
The love is gone
Or was it ever there?
None of this is fair
Then I wonder if you ever cared
I loved you
Or did I?
Confusion has the best of me
but if you still love me
I'll always miss you.
Copyright ©
Sarafina
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2004-03-20 02:03:59]
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Re: To an old flame
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:22:31 AM AEST
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Sad but great write!
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: To an old flame
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:01:16 AM AEST
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| a good write. but don't forget when u said "When you were still mine" if you truly love some one they are never yours but you are theirs. |
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Re: To an old flame
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:09:59 AM AEST
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*Snif snif* So sad! Written from the heart! Great write keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: To an old flame
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by Arius-Inues on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:51:15 AM AEST
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| WOW this was a good wright, and WOW. |
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