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Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
Contributed by
swiftsouljah
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:55:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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2:30 A.M.
My friends…
I’m the last of them
Sitting here all alone
Cause Beautiful
Your gone
How the memory
Of you purely torments me
Wishing, hoping, begging,
Insistent pleading
Constant beseeching
On my knees now praying
That you would either come back
Or leave my thoughts… just like that
My mind echoing
Your voice resounding
No matter how hard I try
Why am I always drowning…
In my thoughts about you
I sit here and think
Open this bottle
And just drink
Vodka 80 proof
Im only 19…
Still a youth
A half a bottle of liquor
Downed
Just to forget ya…
Beautiful
Then why am I here
Sitting on my floor
Drowning in liquor
Forgetting ya…
Naw… just love sicker
How…
Drunk as
I just don’t get it
All I see is you
Even though
These eyes are blurry
Not a care in the world
Then why am I crying
Why do I feel
Just like I’m dying
Cause the world
Don’t matter
But I can’t have you
Just making me madder
More confused
Drunk dreaming
My ears are still ringing
My mind echoing
Your voice resounding
No matter how hard I try
Why am I always drowning…
In my thoughts about you
Before you… Beautiful
I never wanted a girl
That I couldn’t get
Girls with features
That defy any fantasy
A girl that fulfills
All of my dreams
Beautiful your it
21 girls loved…
Just to get stabbed in the back
Why did I have to go through that
Just to meet you
To see you
To know you
To fall in love with you
Beautiful
And realize my mistake
And take it all back
Regret…
Making my heartbeat go flat
To meet you
Beautiful
And be revived
To see you
Beautiful
And stay alive
To know you
Beautiful
And start to cry
To fall in love with you
Beautiful
And wish I had died
Another sip…
Just don’t fix it
My mind echoing
Your voice resounding
No matter how hard I try
Why am I always drowning…
In my thoughts about you
Beautiful
Why did I fall into such deception
A great poet…
Love started the conception
Feeling sensations
That I had never seen
Witnessing things
That I had never dreamed
Noticing emotions
That cause such devotion
Being cool
Taking everything in slow motion
Thrust into this
All of a sudden
In rush
Can’t drive fast enough
Leaving them in the dust
Everything straightened out
Finally, I’m on the right track
Thrust into this
All of a sudden
Completely changed
Who am I…
Who???
I thought my life
Was all about you
Living life with no fear
No need for any tears
Thrust into this
All of a sudden
Scared… of the one thing
I’ve never felt
To love and to be loved back
Despite 21 girls
I’m still a stranger to that
I’ve been cursed
With a heart that’s full of love
And I can’t wait to use it
But I’m soo scared
Cause I’ve been hurt
So I duck and hide behind the music
Cause that’s as close as I can get to it
Cause Beautiful
Your gone
How the memory
Of you purely torments me
Wishing, hoping, begging,
Insistent pleading
Constant beseeching
On my knees now praying
That you would either come back
Or leave my thoughts… just like that
My mind echoing
Your voice resounding
No matter how hard I try
Why am I always drowning…
In my thoughts about you
Beautiful
Ding, ding, ding
It's all because of you
3:00 A.M.
I start to dream
© Wayne Wende
Copyright ©
swiftsouljah
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2004-03-19 23:55:02]
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Re: Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
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by xBeautyForAshesx on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 01:23:46 AM AEST
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| Ahh Tres Bonne!Bravo. |
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Re: Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:58:33 AM AEST
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Oh what a story! Hmm did you tell her these words? I hope you find what you look for! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:17:56 PM AEST
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wow......outstanding emotional write.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:20:43 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL SHOULD BE IN A BOOK.
YOU'RE A VERY TALENTED YOUNG MAN.
DON'T LET THAT RUIN YOUR FUTURE
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Re: Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:14:27 PM AEST
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| Your writting is so emotionally touching. DROWNING thoughts of you. Thats a familiar feeling. And as much as you think it will when its all said and done (and your head hurts so bad you can hardly lift it) It never really goes away. I think theres a reason for everything and if this feeling you have is that strong don't let it go. You never know what will happen. Don't live your life for the one you love, but always keep a place for them in it. I think its a good thing to feel love like that as long as you don't lose sight of yourself. Always follow your heart. |
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Re: Drowning (Beautiful part IV)
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:15:48 PM AEST
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| Your writting is so emotionally touching. DROWNING thoughts of you. Thats a familiar feeling. And as much as you think it will when its all said and done (and your head hurts so bad you can hardly lift it) It never really goes away. I think theres a reason for everything and if this feeling you have is that strong don't let it go. You never know what will happen. Don't live your life for the one you love, but always keep a place for them in it. I think its a good thing to feel love like that as long as you don't lose sight of yourself. Always follow your heart. |
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