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Who am I?
Contributed by
Calling_All_Angels
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:57:36 PM in AEST
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Theres Nothing to live for,
now that your gone.
The yelling has stopped
but where is my silence?
I put you behind me.
But you took a piece of me.
Where have you gone?
I need that piece.
If you are me.
then who am I?
Where did I go?
Who am I?
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Re: Who am I?
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by Kie on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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| I think this is a nice start. Keep on writing and don't ever stop! Welcome to YPDC....Kie |
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Re: Who am I?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 11:59:58 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.... Number 1 rule of the world of poetry: DO NOT downgrade your work by saying it's not that great...... we all start somewhere, this is a good start
keep it up! |
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