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The End Of Two Lives
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:21:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I had no idea
you hated me so much.
I always knew that
I annoy people,
but never knew
how much.
I’m sorry!
Please don’t point that
gun at me.
I didn’t mean to
hurt you!
Wait!
No!
Don’t point it at yourself!
You aren’t a bad person!
All you need is help!
Please, just put the gun
on the floor.
Don’t be so hasty to
put it to use.
You ignore my yelling,
and shoot your brains out,
right in front of me.
I am an even worse person, now.
I made you kill yourself!
Even when I try to help,
all I do is wrong.
I see the blood leak out of your
lifeless body,
and think of all who will miss you.
It’s all too much!
I take the gun from you limp hand
and prevent myself from
causing more pain.
So I shoot myself.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-03-19 22:21:42]
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Re: The End Of Two Lives
(User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:32:49 PM AEST
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| Yes i agree that it is twisted but hey its a form of art so it can be and i thought that it was very well writen. |
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Re: The End Of Two Lives
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by TwEeK on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:32:42 PM AEST
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this is kinda like my poems, one kills self and so dose the other one except mine are cause of love, i like this poem though, its nice, its painfull and kinda calm, well maybe not i dunno :oP
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