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Drowning Nightmares
Contributed by
pompous
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:41:12 PM in AEST
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maybe it was an imagination
or just another nigthmare
a simple justification
but I wouldn't care
it was too late
the night was upon me
the dreams of hate
stood above flying freely
I wake up drowning
right there in the sea
everywhere there's lightning
Im holding onto me
the day isn't dark but red
the storm raises its voice
its wishing that I was dead
but dying isn't my choice
the waves climb so high
I struggle to keep above the surface
the water touches the sky
this dream is a horrific mess
I look beyond the storm
and see the sun shine
keeping the place so warm
if I can get there, its mine
the storm is too fierce
I can't make it through
Im crying dying tears
Im losing my point of view
one more terrifying wave
it knows it has me
I drown to my watery grave
falling to the bottom of the sea
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Re: Drowning Nightmares
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by badlander on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 09:32:41 PM AEST
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| WAKE UP!! Good stuff!! I felt like I was there with all the hope and then the hopelessness.COOL!! |
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Re: Drowning Nightmares
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:08:34 AM AEST
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That was... wow... just wow... :) It, somewhat, made me smile... thank you
Lindsey |
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